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Bad Habits

I don't always make the right choice
But my intentions are good
I'd do anything for you
And you know I would

Like a siren you seem to call
And each time I come running
As a failed assassin

For my sanity you keep gunning

 

  Bad habits

  I need to break

  Bad habits

  My life they take

 

Work hard every day

To make that dollar

Spend it fast

At the hoot-n-holler

 

Two fifty a bottle

Twenty bucks a song

A dollar to say hi

Then spend it all night long

 

  Bad habits

  I need to break

  Bad habits

  My life they take

 

I wish I could

Find the key

Open the lock

And be set free

 From

 

  Bad habits

  I need to break

  Bad habits

  My life they take

  Bad habit 

  How well I know

  Bad habits

  A bad way to go
 

 

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  • Summer Dawn
    February 19, 2008

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    really done well. really reads and sounds more like a song to me. completely flawless on this one in my opinion. very good write.


  • Wilted Rose Bush
    February 17, 2008
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    I love the repetition and the rhyming in this, it worked very well. The poems also very expressive of your thoughts. well done!