This is for the Bumble Bee that made this flower bloom…
Sometimes I smell you on my clothes
Sometimes I smell you in my head,
I go through your letters sometimes
And smell every word you ever said,
I touched the place you last tickled me
I touched every fiber on my floor
I touched where you last kissed me
In the frame of the door
I look out into the ocean
And wonder if I could swim it to you
I’d get over my phobia
And submerge myself in blue
Or get some pirates to leave me
On some godforsaken beach
Which will conveniently be Lake Superior
Where you will be in reach, darlin’,
Kiss my face and hold my hand,
I’m glad you agreed to be my man
Your smile lifts me up, your laugh makes me fly
You leave me weak at the knees, your soul in your eyes
Is enough to keep me standing still,
And a bright glow begins to fill
Me up, I am complete.
It took me longer than we liked but
I asked to be with you
Because you inspire me to no end
And I love everything you do
So long ago I asked you if
This is what you still wanted
The day was frigid, my fingers froze
Yet I still counted
The months of bliss that were ahead
If you forgave me
And when you did, I kissed you
Mid-sentence Bumble Bee!
I want you to-
Kiss my face and hold my hand,
I’m glad you agreed to be my man
Your smile lifts me up, your laugh makes me fly
You leave me weak at the knees, your soul in your eyes
Is enough to keep me standing still,
And a bright glow begins to fill
Me up, I am complete.
For now I’m stuck here on this rock
And we have to wait it out
Two years will go by
Our love will be about
This passion that carries over the sea
The fact that when we’re with the other
We’re the best we can be
Bumble, I love you,
It’s hard, I understand
But let’s stick together
And stick to the plan
Kiss my face and hold my hand,
I’m glad you agreed to be my man
Your smile lifts me up, your laugh makes me fly
You leave me weak at the knees, your soul in your eyes
Is enough to keep me standing still,
And a bright glow begins to fill
Me up, I am complete.
Hug me tight and stand by me
Unlock my heart, you have the key
When you sing to me, I beam all around
Your fingers find mine, I’m glad we found
That person that is your every dream
And your kisses tend to seem
Like the missing piece to my puzzle.
Author notes
It's a song.
I know it's cheesy/corny.
I don't really want comments on it, actually.
<3
Please tell me what you think
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slightly cheesy?
i think might have deliberatly used clice to your advantage here
it even has rhyme? really diffrent to what i would normally expect from you but i guess that shows your able to produce diffrent things too.
i couldnt hear it as a song, if i did i heard it as a boyband ballad.
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Cheesy/corny? All love is.
Your rhyme feels forced, maybe different from some of the nonsense I have seen, but forced all the same. I felt as if the sentences were not of the same stanza and it was just random writing all over the place. -
-And wonder if I could swim it to you
eliminate it?
i could hear this as a song.
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this is lovely.
so sweet and delicate.
<333
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dude that so damn adorable
♥
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