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Weakend Butterfly

Slowly spreading embroidered wings
Gently fluttering from flower to flower
With each quiver, a slight breeze it brings
Sparkles fall from each wing creating a shower..

Delicately watching which way she goes
Carefully hiding the damage that was done
Wings still sparkle, but she no longer glows
Her beauty, confidence, and life he left undone..

A beautiful butterfly slowly floats to the ground
Wings lightly slowing down, taking a lengthy doze
The gentle wind and birds cries the only sound
A weakened butterfly slowly dies beneath a rose..

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haven't wrote in a while, don't be too critical. (=

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  • Nightscar
    February 26, 2008

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    your poetry is still as great as when we first spoke I love you angel keep writing because you'll always be my butterfly


  • Candy6
    February 18, 2008
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    lovely

    Lovely poem. Beautiful imagery. I love butterflies!

  • Janie5
    February 17, 2008
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    lovely