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Always and Forever

Tonight …is the always and forever of us
Tonight …is a promise of two souls completing one another
but our souls are only catching up to our hearts
Because this is not the beginning

Tonight is only an announcement
An announcement of our love which has been resting within

At some point before this day there was one single moment that marked the beginning
How many moments have defined our lives?
The one moment that defined “us” was our beginning

It wasn’t today
It was the day I could first look into your eyes and see our future
The day that only love could be heard in our minds
Today is however, us sharing with the world the love we feel
And that is something truly indescribable

From this moment on I promise you us together
From the days of rich and of the days of poor
The days of gloom and the days of light
Every moment, every second … this light in my heart for you will never dim
I promise you that

I make this promise as our souls complete one another
And are hearts beat as one
I make this promise for always and forever

Author notes

i content with this. i know its not the tradtionaly poem but i havent written a single poem in months and this contest truley insipred me. Im not so great on the rhyming but if i ever got married i would deff. make it something simialr to this.

good luck and congrats on your marriage

kelly lin

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  • RunningFree
    February 19

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    Although this isn't a traditional poem, I like this. I like the message in it about a wedding being an announcement to the world of something internal that is experienced between two people. Thank you for entering my contest.