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Poor Sub With No Cheese

The sub was placed on the counter
Turkey was placed on the bottom
The on top of that was mayo

On top of the mayo was lettuce

Then the second piece of bread lay down

Something was missing

There was no cheese

The poor sub will have to suffer

Because there wasn't any cheese

Who would do this

What evil mind would hurt the sub

I can't imagine that person

Wait

Was it you?

Author notes

Cheese rules people! Don't make your sub suffer with no cheese!

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  • charmander13
    September 16, 2008

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    YES I totally agree with you!!! It NEEDS cheeesee!!!! Everything needs cheeese!!!! LOL

    Great poem btw

    I this


  • Blooming Poet
    March 3, 2008

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    LOL. This s so unquie. I love seeing humourous poems, that aren't in the box of norm. Poor poor sub, that must be a cold hearted person, tto forget the chees.


  • Silent But Deadly
    March 1, 2008
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    hahahaha its great! But I think it was YYYOOOOUU who forgot the cheese!


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    February 29, 2008

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    Cheesy... In a good way :)

    WOW... I love cheese, and I think that might be what all the other poems on AP are missing...CHEESE! Great work!

    Laura xxx


  • Tilted-Misschief
    February 29, 2008
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    omg!
    I love it


  • Simply Simple
    February 20, 2008

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    Awww! poor sub! It needs cheese!! Lol. I loved this. It was funny and flowed well. Great write. ^.^


  • Chocolate Chip
    February 18, 2008
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    hahahahaha.....this is so funny! and of course i like cheese

    great and hilarious write!


  • And Hyetal
    February 18, 2008
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    This was hilarious! Every sandwich needs cheese!

    Who, me?
    Forget the cheese?
    Why would I do that?
    Oh, please!
    Every sub needs cheese,
    that is absolutely true,
    and forgetting about that cheesy stuff
    is something I cannot do!

    Great write.

    ~Cassie

    • BeautifullyBroken42
      February 18, 2008

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      good that person that evil person is out there somewhere!!!! Oh when I get my hands on him/her i will.... just you wait!!!


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    February 17, 2008
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    Haha! Yes! This slays!
    Ode to the cheesy sub!

    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~

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