You tried to ruin me,
I did nothing to you.
You made me hate myself,
as you both laughed on.
Crying myself to sleep,
you were both so rested.
I wanted to die,
just to escape for a moment,
from your snickers and your glares.
I wanted to give up,
I was close....
But I didn't
I survived.
And look at you two now,
a whore who can't close her legs,
and a mother at 16.
My how times have changed.
Author notes
This is a very personal write... I actually have tears in my eyes.... This is a true story about how two girls treated me in highschool, they called themselves my friends, yet they ran away from me, called me names and had fun at my expense... "This is hard for me to write" But as you can see at the end times have changed.. This all happened when I was 14, I am now 22, but despite how much time passes, I still can't erase it. *I have nothing against young mothers as well*
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Some people can be absolute tarts!
Great background
Congrats on the HM hun
♥
Stay safe
Love you
~Manda
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oh wow
a very emotional and strong poem
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This poem is so satisfying. I try not to be happy at another's expense, but this just made me joyous. It's nice to know that the manipulators and puppeteers will get what's coming to them
A mother at sixteen?
My, how times have changed...
YES!
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this is amazi
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Beautiful poem
wOW the poem is beautifull it actually reminds me of my life in the dormitory school, the girl I thought was my friend grew envious of my performance so she an her co made my test marks to be cancelled an you know what that means well some how the truth came to light and she an her co were dismissed an she is tarnished an worthless now. -
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I am glad that you got your victory in the end! It is always nice to see the good guys win in the end. Thank you for your comment.
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Very real emotion, I felt that right with you. Wonderfully written. Such a shame we find it so hard to put things like this behind us. Thank you for sharing.
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Very Good
What a shame that you had to pick such bad friends
you must have confidence in yourself.look in the mirror every day and say I'm Gorgeous and Im worth ten
of scum like you and I can write very good poetry.JUDMC(George)Try reading"Peter's Girl" it is relevant to what you have been going through BEST WISHES Keep writing -
So powerful sweetheart! It's always hard to get these writes out, but it does help us heal some of our pain. I'm very sorry that you went through that. But YES look at you now!!! Someone beautiful and strong...
It can't be erased, but you can heal and the best revenge we can ever get is to live a happy life!
This was a wonderful pice
Auntie Jacks
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It does feel much better to get the writes out, I always wonder what people may think when they read something so emotional like this, but I have been glad to see that everyone seems to be so sportive. Thank you
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It sure does!! You'll find most people here are very supportive hun! A lot of us write to help us move past our hurts.
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Excellent
Aww this is so sad hun (((((hugs)))) but hey you've come through it all now. It must of been awful for you to have had unhappy school years. I strongly believe what goes around comes around. Hope it wasn't too painful writing this, and I hope it gives comfort to others who maybe be having unhappy school years. Very well written indeed.
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thank you, it was hard to go through, but I slowly managed, it was only really one semester, but it was in grade nine, and I almost failed because I always missed school, but thank you for your support.
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