It sickens me,
How could you hurt me this way?
all that you've caused,
has inflicted my pain,
I won't forget you,
But i won't Leave you Glorified,....
Last night there was a death in the room,
the glass will be viewed as half empty,
with no one to consume it but me,
Now with my head hanging low,
I tell myself to never show..
The sunny side,
of the room,
filled with flowers that i bought for you,
they will wilt, fade and slowly be removed,
like you were before,
just out of view,...
Now I can stand next to your grave,
will my tears find you,
will you feel my pain?
can you see that i'm alone now,
You're alone too,
six feet under,
out of view.
A contest entry
- loss of love by LanguishedLad.
650 points, ended March 9, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My Broken Heart Lies Bleeding by SchizoChic.
600 points, ended February 29, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very nice. Well done.
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I feel all the different stages of grief in this poem...
Really great write with so much emotion!!
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WOW
I liked this poem ALOT very well penned, I wish you all the best in the competition.
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That gives me goosebumps. It says so well what most of us have to go through at one time or another, the pain and the loneliness of loss. You summed it up.
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This is a really sad write full ofemotion. It reallymademefeel your sadness. well done and good luck!
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