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Old World Loyalty-- Semi Erotic

Oh the sweetness of your voice.
Tattooing visions of ebony flesh
pressed against delicate skin...
white as a lily...vermilion with
the marks of the passion shared.

Tears cried from throngs of ecstasy
erased by kisses showered from
heaven sent sweetly soft lips...
eternal memories etched
into the halls of my soul.
Oh...how You amaze me as You
make me whole.

Concrete control and passionate care
bringing together the bittersweet remains
of the broken woman You met
yesterday...

Offering to You the dedication and loyalty
from woman to Man...from levels of
worlds of old...for society has crushed...
made a mockery of the concept of
truth and honesty...yet i offer up to You
the honor and reverence due.

Flame of love breathing life into me...
shadows of bodies twisting and turning
in candle light's warm glow...
penetration to the depths of
psyche meeting psyche...
intermingling of spiritual realms.

In the mist of Your golden manhood
raining down on me...
gaze into the eyes of the one
who is eternally Yours and see...
levels of dedication from the
cherub-like angelic portals of her soul...
and know...

all of her is Yours...
into eternity.

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  • LilyRose
    March 2, 2008

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    Heavenly laden with golden touching images of love and the pathways penned of how deep your love and commitment will travel... very good...


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    "Flame of love breathing life into me...
    shadows of bodies twisting and turning
    in candle light's warm glow..."


    Very nice, and best of luck in the contest dear.


    Love and peace,
    mj.