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the non speaker

Stuttered steps into conversation.{untrustworthy vocals}
You interpose:
aparaphrasedstereotypeorclicheasunfoundedwisdom
Something to block my insufficient protests.{slammed back against that metaphorical wall}
Not a trickle of original thought must pass my drying lips, as they wait for appropriate and insignificant space.
False starts-
Minor utterances.
Annoying.
stopbuttinginwillyou?i'mtryingtofuckingsaysomethinghere,atheendoftheday...
At the end of which day?
I only wanted to tell you I loved you.{I love you by the way incase my silence did not tell you that}
But you didn't want me to,{you wouldn't hear me as I shouted in your ear}
Now I never will.


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its a bit rubbish. it needs some work.

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  • introvertish-divert
    February 18, 2008

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    ah, at the end of the day, what a wonderous phrase. i like the lack of spaces, and silence being the telling of "i love you" xx