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Vexed

The storm has been upon me, all this while,
a deluge that drowns my very soul.

A contest entry

Let me know How this makes you feel, what do you think?

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  • individuality gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    it is still raining here, it never bloody stops lol good job i have an umbrella though, cheap at 79.99


  • Naridill
    February 18, 2008

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    I like this - its poetic and its peaceful. It has a metaphor and imagery through out. Well done.

    Thanks for entering,