Brand my lips with your lies.
Will me to believe,
What I know to be false.
But I want you to love me so bad.
Brand my lips with your lies,
Stain them with,
My lost pride.
Scars that run so deep,
Survive,
In your empty eyes.
Using me,
For your own ends.
And the lie begins again.
Brand my lips with your lies,
Will me to believe,
What no one else will.
The lies,
They run so deep.
I know they are false.
But I can't let you go.
Even for my own sake.
Forget me.
Will me to wake,
From the spell,
Your empty eyes have cast upon me.
Or just continue to brand my lips with your lies,
And keep me,
Where I so despise,
To stay.
Author notes
foreverlastingcoma
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Comments
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lies suck..i hate being lied to..i try not to lie at all..people could really cause a lot by lying..to be honest with you the beggining of this poem through me of a little but as i started reading it i started liking it from the second staza on..i especially liked these lines
Brand my lips with your lies,
Stain them with,
My lost pride.
Scars that run so deep,
Survive,
In your empty eyes.
Using me,
For your own ends.
And the lie begins again
I'm not really a big fan of repetition, but overall i really did like this poem don't get me wrong..its just the beggining i feel as if its missing something..nice write still!..good luck in the contest -
Good write on the lies and deception
man lies down and does not rise; until the heavens are no more, they will not awake nor arise from their sleep.
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As much as I did enjoy your words here I have to bring to note that you have used the prompt within your write and I had stated you could not do such. Your words have penned a wonderful piece over all with this prompt.
Thank you for entering.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Another good composition--You have a lot of talent, young lady and you express your feelings very well--Good Job and best of luck in the contest!
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