Were these my last words??

Mark Susngi In world war II......
"Charge to death!!!!!!!!"

"A shot hits me, am I dead...?

Nah...I trip on my shoelace and die"

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meh lol

A contest entry

1 of 13 Challenges [Rounds, if you will]. by Naridill. 450 points, ended February 18, 2008, 25 entries
Silver trophy winner
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By me, right now

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Ryno
February 19, 2008
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Congrads on the silver

Naridill
February 18, 2008

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Yeah - that evil look made me feel guilty about reading it over and over Love this - its a brave heart death

Thanks for entering,

wakingdevil
February 19, 2008
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Thx

Ryno
February 17, 2008
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Oh my!
Thats a riot
Your so creative

wakingdevil
February 17, 2008
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Did I see sarcasm there?

Ryno
February 19, 2008
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NO
I was being honest, I really liked it

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right now

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