Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

not titled

god could have created me black and white
but he gave me color and he gave me sight
he created a life just for me
so I can live to be the best i can be

but i took that life and i treated it bad
I saw what I wanted and not what i had
I longed for things that were not mine
on purpose or not I crossed the wrong line

ive been writing this one for a while and cant think of what to say next, and suggestions please feel free to give

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • The Cube
    February 28, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    It's good for a start. Unfortunately I havn't a clue what to add next.