It takes one seeming silent sigh to start afresh
a world of dawns in golden red,
beams of a sun that break over turbulent, troubled waters
So let’s make today great.
When the rain comes…
let’s not reach for covers,
but rather dance in the refreshing showers
When the world spins…
let’s not slam on the breaks,
but rather throw arms to the sky and laugh in the thrill
Let’s make today great.
Let’s
Let’s live for the moment,
if only for the moment
Let’s make today great.
Let’s
let’s live today.
Let’s live only each day,
as this is the only way
we can live all the days of our lives,
not missing a single one.
Let’s…
Let’s live today
Let’s live tomorrow
Let’s live each day
Let’s…
Let’s live.
Author notes
Gah. Not my best at all. Writer's block has got me bad!
Wonderful idea for a contest though!
A contest entry
- Take Your Time, Don't Live Too Fast.... Troubles Will Come And They Will Pass.... by Veronica Leigh.
300 points, ended March 2, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I actually really like this. Great job and thank you for entering!


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Thank you very much for the comment!
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Stop belittling yourself! It's great! Makes me wanna dance in the rain even more

Seriously, great poem, amazing message. You rock.
Let's live...
(six weeks and five days)

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The metaphors in this were great and the words really made you feel happy. We should live our lives that way.Well done on this great write. Good luck in the contest



