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The World Needs More

I believe the world needs
A lot more tenderness.
A lot more warmth, more softness,
More shared hugs and kisses.

More gentleness and grace,
Openness and care.
The desire to shine our light
Like magic from the sun.

We need to get away
From the use of weapons,
The use of things that cause
Physical harm and death to others.

We need to grab hold
Of being one family
Which is what this world
Is meant to consist of.

We're meant to exist
The best that we can.
We're meant to live
As humans unique.

The better as humans
We can be towards others,
The better as people
We make ourselves.

The world needs more.

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  • slick99
    July 22

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    GOLD TROPHY

    congrats on the gold trophy!!! good job!!! -slick99

  • vanessa reen gold member
    May 10

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    This is such a wonderful poem with such words of wisdom. What you have written here is so true and I applaud you for sharing this. Congratulations on winning the gold trophy, you certainly deserve it. well done.


  • fangs to blame
    May 2

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    Yes my friend. I also belive that the world needs more than what we the people are giving it. If we contribute the love we show to our family to the rest of the world.
    they all will become like brothers and sisters not enimies.


  • Meet Your Meat
    April 5

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    I love this no wonder you got a gold!!!!!!!! You expressed your thoughts and thats what made it a wonderful poem.


  • killme-kissmerio
    April 4
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    love it

    i agree with you 100% this is a very deep poem i like you expressed your ideas so well beautiful!


  • nichtmich silver member
    March 31

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    A world of children's love would be your idea of Utopia, how sweet! You Sky, are a child lover extraordinaire. Very telling poem.

  • Desire gold member
    February 21

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    Powerful!!

    Magnificent voice You have shared my Friend to Empower also Inspire others to see what a difference they can make..

    Loved this!!
    By sharing Your thoughts, You have made a world of impact...as I and many others read...
    We can feel the passion through Your words~
    Sincerity that shines from Your Spirit-Heart
    The heaviness feels lighter~

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • WhiteAngelCake
    February 19
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    Good! I like this poem, and... yeah I like it. Good job!

  • Sweet Jane
    February 17
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    Good poem.
    I really like it alot.
  • Sunshine Princess silver member
    February 17

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    I believe this the world needs lots of this and more thank you for writing for my contest love Genna

  • tawk gold member
    February 17

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    I so agree with your amazing write. We need to be better humans ourselves that is where it starts Good luck in the contest

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