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Unshealth that sword



  "take your time, don't live too fast...
troubles will come and they will pass"

  the blade around your waist
easily tied and easily unshealthed
nobody knows your reasons on why you love me

its sad to think my dad won't see you the way i do
he tries so hard to try to accept you
but you tempt his anger
in this little game of tag

you anger him
and then he tries payback

you have this little temptation that you never pass by
you see the oppurtunity, you take it no problem
you don't even need to unshealth that sword

  even when you manage to anger my dad
the problem is with all the enemies we've had
you might as well just admit defeat

  you need to take some time, dont rush into life
plan everything out, and pratice till you get it right
those eyes you pocess make it easier for you
but you need your comrades to make it through
stop pushing us aside and let us into your heart

  troubles will come and they will pass
however how can they pass if you won't unshealth that sword
and unshealth your heart
time will come and time will pass
but the problem won't go until you accept us and
fight what's in your heart, fight that and you will see
your pain will come to pass

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  • Veronica Leigh
    February 17, 2008
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    Good! Thank you for entering!

    • Tsunai Ketsuma
      February 21, 2008
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      thanks, this isn't one of my favs but i was brain dead so this is what i came up with lol good luck judging
      Tsunai Ketsuma