As each day dawns anew
new mistakes to render
old friends to find
and new friends to meet
loved ones leave
and new are reborn
tasks become harder
while we try to find our way
rush hours hurry by
and days move to fast
tears are shed, yet wiped with love
past or present
there is always a new venture
so live life to the fullest
while trying to find your dreams.
A contest entry
- Take Your Time, Don't Live Too Fast.... Troubles Will Come And They Will Pass.... by Veronica Leigh.
300 points, ended March 2, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very nice
This has a sweet, innocent sound to it. It looks at both the negative and positives, and you basically make it sound as though everything comes to a balance. I like it. Thank you for sharing this piece. -
This is wonderful! I'm in love with this one. Great job!!!
P.S. the background is PERFECT!
A2FL
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I must say...this is very good advice to anyone living in today's world.
Often life goes by so fast that we all forget what it means to really live.
Your poem is beautiful.
Best of luck in the contest!
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