Sitting without your hugging warmness
in insistence of cold, cruel isolation,
waking torments of desisting mirror cracks;
in absence of subtle refuge without your love.
Walk in darkness of deafening silence;
in evaporating fondness, touching consolation,
efforts to forget, what happened consequences;
in trying to erase memories ever from mind.
Contradictions of emotions unconquered,
stunned of love lost in last of sleeps,
pricking solitude as sharp edged dagger.
Faded dawns in quivers of shivers,
in dried silent tears of retina docks,
echoes of my longings seducing in nudity.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: Option 1
Picture 'C'
A contest entry
- Choose Your Inspiration by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended March 1, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Free Verse by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 5, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great wriite, beautiful take on the other contests prompt. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem wiith my contest
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You have some images within your words that bring a coldness to the heart and soul but then with your image choice I can understand why. Well done!
Thank you for entering.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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thoughtful take on the prompt. success.
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wow, this is very cold and icy, a lovely write, full of lovely descriptions, great job and good luck in the contets =)
stephanie.
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