Last night I was cruelly entangled
By quite a frightfully ominous dream
I found myself missing, dead in a
Dark and lanky cell of black demise.
As I stared up from this dark prison
I saw no panic, no sign that anyone
Knew my absence in our usual merriment
I saw life rolling along, without me.
But through this peaceful insipidity
I saw your beautiful face with a look of panic
Running through the streets in alarm
Crying with trepidation at my nonexistence
And there looking through the rusty bars
At you searching for me day and night
Do I finally realize that in this base world
You truly are the only one who really cares.
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Leave Out All the Rest? Nice one I liked it a lot
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Thanks! I really did have this dream though... O.O
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Woah...That's not good...I have to question your use of base in the second last line though. *raises eyebrows*
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very good *virtual high five* i like the 1st stanza it draws the reader in!
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wow an emotional and powerful write.really good wordsand metaphors used
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i liked this. very discriptive. good job!!
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Wow that was some dream. I could feel it as I read this. Filled with lots of good imagery and suspense. I liked it.
Brian
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