Eight months ago Sue Cardwell rhymed at me
She made me smile and want to know her more
The poems that she wrote could speak to me
They rhymed so well but flow was sometimes poor
I saw her talent could be made to soar
If she just looked a little at her verse
Most people would have chosen to ignore
She gobbled up my thoughts and did not curse
Together every line we can rehearse
My poetry is better for her aid
No suggested form is too perverse
A lion of a puss I think is made
And now amongst her friends a King and Queen
The finest poet Kent has ever seen!
Author notes
Spensarian Sonnet ie a b a b b c b c c d c d e e rhyme scheme With thanks to Amera for showing me that it can work well. I hope you like this Sue, it needs polish but I thought you may want to see it as it settles down.
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Sue is a wonder lady tis true
This poem that was made by you
Lets us see through your ways
The sweetness of Sue durning these days
Wonderfully done for a Lady my friend
Thank you for this to read. Riftkin
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a great write here. Im sure she will be really happy about this poem. I come from Kent too, (kent UK?)
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Apart from the last but one line-'amonget'-perfection-
thought I'd just wind you up!!!
xxx Hilly
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Well spotted!
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Does that get me elevated???
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well done. i am sure she will love it.
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aww.... a Spensarian Sonnet dedicated to a wonderful lady. This is really wonderful. It's really special to me because I know both of you.
Love,
Amera♥
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What can I say...but...Thank You Jeff, I couldn't do it without you my tutor and friend...
Love
Sue
xxx
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