cold dark night,
sudden noise fright
knock at the door.
Its late midnight
i walk down
the stairs...
closet case scenario,
I'm scared of the tool.
Sudden burst of pain
scream in agony...
I open the dark door
no one there, but empty
whispers of gloom.
my doom, can be sleepy...
I cant see his face.
I want to see it before
I die! I hear a laugh,
moan to the wolf...
I close the door,
nothing right in sight.
Out of the corner of my
eye, i feel a smack to the floor...
Screaming, screaming, screaming
no more, no more, I cant
stand this pain. I'm bleeding,
look at me! Don't laugh at me! ...
I wake up horrified, alone.
Black darkness fills the damp room
I'm not alone, I'm at someones home.
I try to move, stuck! Straps and chains,
a flicker of light, gargoyle stands...
He rips at my face, my hair
covered with my blood, I will
die. hollowed, please, please save
me. he rips off his mask, to fill
me with tears, of hate and vengeance.
my blood boils until i feel veins exploding
muscle and bone ripping from their sockets
mind implodes
courpse explodes
SATANIC fury
ripped from this earth
raped from my body
Grim reaper takes me with cold clasped clams...
Author notes
jezz
Through the eyes of the victim
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A contest entry
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Comments
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thank you for entering! this was a very dark piece..but hey, I liked it! you did a nice job! good luck!
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Nice!
This is quite a powerful write,
and i like how it reads really fast.
It makes it more suspenceful and chilling.
Thanks for your entry and kudos on the write, best of luck to you
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oooooh.... very evil ^.^
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Thanks for entering my contest.
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Oh wow, that twist at the end just intensified the whole poem so much! This is just brilliant writing
Thanks for entering!
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wow...this is so intense...I like the tiwst at the end....you made it very easy to see what's going on in this peice thank you for your entry
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awesome i am glad you like, this was my first attempt at a thriller/horror
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