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A thought came
Made me feel at home
Home's painful sometimes

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  • Arizona Sunset
    February 24, 2008
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    sad and true homes can sometimes be painful...thank you for sharing, blessings always~ Trisha

  • SueRee
    February 24, 2008

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    Amen

    Even the warm and fuzzy words sometimes have prickly and unpleasant sides. Concise description that lets us add a multitude of our own images. Very Good!

  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    February 24, 2008

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    enjoyed this much more than 'the bucket of emptiness' good glimmer sardonic wit here at HOME kudos thanks for sharing regards zaj


  • Wilted Rose Bush
    February 17, 2008
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    wOW,Short but powerful. you really showed your thoughts in this. well done on this great poem!