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Can't You See

I need help,
Can't you see,
I spend every waking moment now
Alone.

I crave salvation,
Won't you give it to me?

But you see right through me,
I hope that someone else,
Will come to my rescue.

They will help me,
I just have to wait,
Patiently,
Until my time has come.

Author notes

Inspiration from Picture C

A contest entry

Write down what you brain says...

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  • Celticmoon silver member
    March 1

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    Your youth carried much sadness adn still hope shines through in your words here. Sometimes we need to wait and can only hope someone will come alone to lift us up once again.
    Thank you for entering.
    Best of luck to you!


    Blessings
    Bel

  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    February 23

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    sis this one is heart breaking :S u got great job on the pic ur poems are so strong with feelings (L)(L)i hope ur okie dearest sis


  • RainbowGirl257
    February 22
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    thanks!

  • Xx Scarlet Dove xX
    February 21

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    Well done

    Wow, this is powerful. Great take on the prompt! If you need a friend I am always here for you!