I need help,
Can't you see,
I spend every waking moment now
Alone.
I crave salvation,
Won't you give it to me?
But you see right through me,
I hope that someone else,
Will come to my rescue.
They will help me,
I just have to wait,
Patiently,
Until my time has come.
Author notes
Inspiration from Picture C
A contest entry
- Choose Your Inspiration by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended March 1, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Write down what you brain says...
Comments
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Your youth carried much sadness adn still hope shines through in your words here. Sometimes we need to wait and can only hope someone will come alone to lift us up once again.
Thank you for entering.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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sis this one is heart breaking :S u got great job on the pic ur poems are so strong with feelings (L)(L)i hope ur okie dearest sis
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thanks!
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Well done
Wow, this is powerful. Great take on the prompt! If you need a friend I am always here for you!
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