the DARKside of the moon is the only carousel that is eclipsed by the radiant sun.
Author notes
prompt: carousel///16 words
googled picture under: picture for the sun.
i didn't need to go any further as the first one was what was in my mind when i wrote this.
A contest entry
- 16 words by Kuranya.
450 points, ended February 17, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love this piece, completely outside the box, well done
Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best
Karen -
Wow!!
Powerful words spoken my Friend and Happy to see that ink spilled upon these pages~
16Words of BAM!
Wish You only Happiness Dear One!
Thank You for being You-
also Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I like this line a lot, it's very deep (for lack of a word that hasn't lost its meaning). Good luck in the contest.
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wow this is a lovely though, and i like this line veyr much, great job, and good luck in the ocntets =)
stephanie =) -
Yay! You entered!!
Fabulous 16 words that are darkly creative
♥
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Manda
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yes i did! i found a picture of a sun that fit my piece perfectly or at least i think so, hehehe. thanx for the sweet words. i'm going to go eat. one of these entries made me hungry and now i'm even hungrier, hehehe, DARK.
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