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carousel of DARKness

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the DARKside of the moon is the only carousel that is eclipsed by the radiant sun.

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prompt: carousel///16 words

googled picture under: picture for the sun.

i didn't need to go any further as the first one was what was in my mind when i wrote this.

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  • Kuranya gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    I love this piece, completely outside the box, well done

    Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best

    Karen


  • Desire gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    Wow!!

    Powerful words spoken my Friend and Happy to see that ink spilled upon these pages~
    16Words of BAM!

    Wish You only Happiness Dear One!
    Thank You for being You-
    also Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~



  • Degausser
    February 17, 2008

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    I like this line a lot, it's very deep (for lack of a word that hasn't lost its meaning). Good luck in the contest.


  • luna-midnight silver member
    February 17, 2008

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    wow this is a lovely though, and i like this line veyr much, great job, and good luck in the ocntets =)
    stephanie =)


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 17, 2008

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    Yay! You entered!!
    Fabulous 16 words that are darkly creative


    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


    • theDARK1 gold member
      February 17, 2008
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      yes i did! i found a picture of a sun that fit my piece perfectly or at least i think so, hehehe. thanx for the sweet words. i'm going to go eat. one of these entries made me hungry and now i'm even hungrier, hehehe, DARK.

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