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The Final Goodbye

Early to rise your ready to start your work day
Another Saturday your off and on your way
Only the stars knew that before the day was through
Another lie would surface forever ending me and you.

A man so in love and left without a clue
Work was your lie to go see you know who
Too busy with the kids and our morning routine

I watched you walked out the door just like in my dream

 I tried to text and call time after time
Your pretty good about calling back at the drop of a dime

So I got a little worried, I called your works direct line
My heart broke down and  said "here's your sign"

I fix lunch for the kids so I could have a moment alone

Grabed a pad and paper, I etched this poem in stone
You came home right on time just as you always do
I questioned your wear abouts with you know who

You look right through me and with a cold chill in the air
Another lie into my eyes how do you dare?
With that I sucked up my pride and walked out the door
Screaching the tires up the street I made my engine roar
Tire marks are the only thing left as I grab second gear

My signature of the Final Good-bye of the 2007 year!

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  • MerryGoRound
    April 16
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    Good.

    This one is really well written also. Some of the words are really powerful and give a full comprehension of the situation. Though there are some mispells, 'grabed' has two b's in it. Cool though, happens with me all the time. Keep it up. I think through life you have become well with words. Nice work Poet.