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Acid

It seems like this weather
So dark and gloomy
Brings out something in people
To protect themselves
To run away from their fears
Like acid is falling from the sky

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Exactly 30 words...tried not to use rain or water or wet...so I don't know...

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 18, 2008

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    I like this, it has an honest element to it, just because it says outside the box doesn't mean you can't not use the words good job

    Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best of luck

    Karen


  • Lj-
    February 17, 2008
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    Realistic.

    Best of luck.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 17, 2008
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    hahahahah great job, i really like this!
    good luck in the contest =)
    stephanie .