Models,
paper thin,
with melon
sized breasts
air brushed
edges like
mountain peaks,
hiding in clouds.
Lashes;
synthetic,
balloons
for lips.
Pretty?
Perhaps, to a few.
Substance?
Barely measurable.
Author notes
3] A Teaspoon of Realism
A contest entry
- 10 entries. 10-20 lines. Prompts. by Tangled Angle.
450 points, ended February 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good thoughts and good questions, but most of the skinny models don't have boobs...sucks for them. I think this poem raisies a strong point.
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You portrayed some good thoughts with the questions and all but the words seemed to lack a certain power, other than that a good write.Best of luck in the contest
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