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Around

When can I get off?
I've gone around
Too many times
Please help me
I'm falling

Author notes

I hope this is carousel-y enough...? I tried not to use spinning, so that might take away from it...

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 17, 2008

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    This is a great piece, I think you described well without using spinning too, well done

    Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best

    Karen


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    awww i really like this, sounds so pleading, lovely write, and good luck in the contest =)
    stephanie.


  • theDARK1 gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    you did "spinning" creatively as you didn't say it, but was well implied. loved the pun in the author's comments too. good luck in the contest, DARK.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 17, 2008

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    I like that this can be taken different ways; excellent write

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    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda