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War

You have started a war,
And it shall go on untill the end.
Never halting for a second.
Never in any minute of any day.
Never in any day of the draining years.
The war goes on.
Be ready....

Author notes

it is not about physical war... but more the psycological war between to people when they share a deep hatred.....

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  • N e a r
    February 17, 2008

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    I like the ending. Very powerful words you've used here... War does seem endless. I don't agree with it personally, and reading this seems to agree with me. Nicely penned.