If I could see straight into your soul
I expect I'd see
a bucket of puss
'miked' and
giving the news conference.
A contest entry
- Portals to the soul by AngelEyes13.
300 points, ended March 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent bit of imagery ....
it covers all the bases of society ..
in a few short lines..
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Ah...lovely imagery. One can imagine the putrid green sop within the bucket...nearly the consistency of mayonaise...shot through with tendrils of pulsing red radial growths.
It MUST be nearly spring...
I like the sidecar.
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Short but different, I liked it. Thank you soo much for enetering my contest.
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