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Draft-unfinished

i have left the darkness behind
shrugged off its cobwebs from my eyelashes
I have opened wide the curtains of my mind
and i feel the sunshiney fingers of your thoughts prob
seeking substance in my

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  • WOW!

    Such Hope this poem gives...
    It's Beautiful!


  • xquisite
    June 20, 2008

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    "i have left the darkness behind
    shrugged off its cobwebs from my eyelashes"
    My word! your expression is so beautiful! I'm excited to see where this goes!