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"Sensuality"

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At the height of their reciprocative passion,
desires fashioned

to their e'er compulsive greed.
He watches as she gently rubs the lotion
with a motion

to fulfill his every need.

She watched his body tighten with erection
with the detection

of exilerated thrill.
She feels his throbbing in the fondling of her fingers
and she lingers

to hold him at her will.

He caressed her swollen breasts and heard her sighing.
He was dying

to be inside her once again.
And again, she was a slave to his desires.
Her inner-fires

said the union must begin.

They merge and feel the warmness that they treasure
and their pleasure

is equally received.
Their dance of love concluding in their climax
at it’s apex,

sensualities relieved!

Author notes

"Sexy enough?"

The ultimate art of the "Horizontal Dance of Love"!
The giving and receiving is equal!!

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  • fairytalelovestory
    February 27
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    wow just what i needed


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    Oh how have I missed this one until now
    Hot and sexy
    Great imagery of words and what a fab picture too
    Julie


  • One Angry Monkey
    July 3, 2008
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    I'm really intrereagued by the metre you've used for this poem. i have never seen hexameter work without the inclusion of silent beats. It's a consequence no doubt of the 4 syllabol feet, which i really like, and it's not perfect, but perhaps it doesn't need to be.
    Thanks for sharing it, got any others in the same style?


  • Still single
    July 3, 2008
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    yes, thankyou, that was great, and as a nutter for rhythm and rhyme i was as happy on the patterns of the poem as on the content. I really liked the metre you used, although i can't put my finger on what it was, but the rhymes were great and whole piece came together well. Even the picture seems to fit it perfectly.
    Thanks for entering.


  • Angelflower
    May 7, 2008

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    this was really great!! very heated in a sensual way! well done.. I love the imgaery in this..
    in a way it was tender hearted... and yet so very
    passionate!! I really enjoyed this!!I feel wooed!!lol. best of luck..

    Angel


  • BarefootSoul
    April 11, 2008

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    You have a gift of making the reader feel what you are writing....ahem lol. The flow and rhythm of the poem is superb esp the way you spaced certain words to draw out the emotion. Firey writing...love it! Ty for this entry Suz


  • Hebz
    March 14, 2008

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    Love the way you out it into words

    Thnx for entering & Best of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Heba


  • Delete this polease
    March 5, 2008

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    Oh joy something sexual found its way into this contest and now I wish I wasn't in school so I could go have a dance like this with my man. This is amazing. Good luck.


  • Violent Glass
    February 18, 2008
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    wow this is really good
    thanx for entering

  • LovesStrength
    February 17, 2008

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    oh had to read another one I did. This was a great piece thanks for sharing your talent.
    now...shower...

    LS


  • Galaxy2
    February 17, 2008
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    The rymes have wonderfully beenused to create a beautiful effect...
    Awesome!

    Galaxy2


  • Myjoy gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    oh just beautiful. This made me close my eye's and dream of past times where this kind of perfection was just pure bliss. It is not to far from my life I hope to embrace me in it's passions once again. Lovely.

  • karmacae
    February 17, 2008

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    Perfection at its finnest, and yes there is no better love making than when the two are in love, Beautifully written dear, abasulety love it, well done, flawless flow, and the rhyme is amazing.....Blessings, crystalgodess


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    February 17, 2008
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    WOW, a beautiful poem! There isn't much more that I can say except that at this time in the morning it's not good for me!
    I loved the internal rhyme and end line rhyme is terrific, and the title is very apt, Sensuality, this poem is certainly that and more I hope that you'll write more.

    All the best...Sue

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