Love is:
All
and...
All
is illusory
in this physical realm
merely
the education of a child...
True life
is lived
in and through
Spirit...
Energized by the soul,
the body lives
Elevated by the mind,
the body is animated
Dreamt by the Spirit,
true Life is born.
And we
like children
learn the lessons
taught by
the inborn Teacher
in this classroom
of dream....
Author notes
In response to the prompt: Love is a big illusion, and life is a smart confusion.
A contest entry
- Love is a big illusion and Life is a smart confusion by Purush.
550 points, ended February 27, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think...
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Wow!
Concise deep and very meaningful write. Few words to say so much very nice!
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Thanks for commenting here, my friend. Peace, Rhonda
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Ah yes . . . the inborn teacher . . . beautiful and oh so deep!!!!!
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wow!
Such imagery, such wonderful flow! So many great lines!
This is one of your very best! I LOVE THIS 'DREAMY' PIECE!
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so true my friend..your immagaery is the truth of life..well done...
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My thanks for your comment, Jharna. Peace be to you, Rhonda
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All the best
good verse with deep thoughts
all the best in my contest -
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Thank you for offering the contest...Be well, Rhonda
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