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My Foolishness

I've been chasing
For the love I have waste.
Creeping,hoping
For the sweet days I devastate.

Yes, I've spoil from the start,
And now you quit, turn your back.
Ive been to numb of what you suffer inside
Ended me grasp your importance.

I've turned your being into nothingness,
Ruined you until you break.
And now, I'm such a fool to see you go
What I have done, makes me broken into two.

Emptiness is what I feel
Trying to creep if there's something left for me to heal
It's my entire fault, I must confess
Ive been hurt by my foolishness.

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    February 16, 2008
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    very good poem