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No Love, No Pen

As I ponder the idea of writing and how I begin

I return to the past, where my pen was used the most

The words speak from there, telling me one thing

I write the best when I am loved

 

My favourite pieces do not contain l'amore

In fact, once I fell in love, I ceased love-focus

I wrote my soul, what I felt within was more

More than just the love I felt from him

 

I loved the boy, I loved to write

I loved to tell him of a new work of poetic art

He would not understand my words

But he read and appreciated anyway

 

Now I no longer have the love

Without it, I can't seem to write what's in my heart

Empty, just like the ink barrel of my pen

Just like the frame he left behind

 

I waited a lifetime for him to arrive

A lifetime to gain poetic bliss

I'm now lifeless; no love, no pen

I'm lost...

 

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Written on 17th February 2008 at 02:51 GMT

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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 11
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    This is a lovely, poignant piece, Poet. I've been writing since I was 14 and recently turned 51. Poetry has been my sanctuary, my backbones, my chosen method of expression for most of my life. It offers such solace - even when we are not writing ourselves, there are so many other voices singing similar songs, complementing the harmony we all seek. All we ever need do is to write straight from the wells of our hearts - the pen and paper will do the rest. They know what they need to say.

  • strangerforeigner
    February 20, 2008
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    This is a very sweet write. Great form and flow. Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    February 18, 2008
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    For the longest time, love was my muse as well, and I know that it's very hard to write in its absence. I agree with Justin... It's very honest and emotional, and I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Well done, and good luck in your contest!

    Love and light,
    Laura
    xxx

  • Justin3
    February 17, 2008
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    This is a very and honest poem yet delivered in a very image-rich way.Great work!