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Whispers




shadows play a soulful song
in the background of my mind
whisper soft, tantalizing me
with slow riffs against my skin
as you play me with the skillful hands
of a virtuoso caressing my strings,
drifting to the soothing notes as
breaths mingle in a sigh, you are
my maestro, taking me to the heights
of pleasure and beyond. I need you
with a burning intensity that leaves
me shaken, in awe of the feelings
you create in me yet waiting for the
next touch of your fingers on my soul

 

 

 

 

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  • A falling star
    March 5, 2008
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    This was very good. Different than a lot of other love poems.
    Thanks for entering!
    -Sonya

  • Amarige
    February 18, 2008

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    Love can take so many directions sometimes..I like that last part about the waiting to be touched on the soul...Fantastic thoughts sweetheart..I love this..keep up with the happy poems
    Amarige


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 17, 2008
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    Beautiful Piece!

    Honest portrayal with beautiful wording--Well Done


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    February 17, 2008

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    Mum, this is beautiful, sensual but strong. Great imagery in virtuoso caressing my strings.

    I just loved --
    I need you
    with a burning intensity that leaves
    me shaken, in awe of the feelings
    you create in me yet waiting for the
    next touch of your fingers on my soul




    Just again, you leave me with this
    sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    hehehehe
    AAmazingly beautiful words mum


    Cin


  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    February 16, 2008

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    Puuurfect! oh this almost sings and is just so very lovely. I had to read twice just to take it all in again for the thrill. Beautiful.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 16, 2008

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    I hear the pleasant strummed melody my dear; this is beautiful.


    Love and peace,
    mj

  • Bel Ange silver member
    February 16, 2008

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    oh i do love this one so much
    wehn i startd readind this i thougt it was about thet convesation we had bout bein played played like an old fiddle. but i can see this was entirly in teh oposite direction
    hun, we old violins just age gracefuly an eventualy turn into a stradivarius and there ar many a good tune still bein played on them
    it take a very skilled virtuoso to bring out teh best in us. today comment was brougt to you by teh letter M ... M is fo maestro

    bel ange
    jan ♥


  • Kelli Marie
    February 16, 2008

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    Breath taking piece of poetry. Simply beautiful. I enjoyed this read like I would a soft classical concert. Very nice write.
    Kelli

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