…pain
knows my name
it holds me-
in it’s arms
Author notes
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2391/479.jpg?1203210027
this picture inspiration... touches me,
and brings to my thoughts
these words...
A contest entry
- Searching For New Favourites ♥ by Immortal Obscurity.
1750 points, ended April 9, 2008, 51 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 10 word prewrites by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 15, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOw...just wow!! For so long this was me. Pain was holding me. You are something else. Very well written.
Good good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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Wow... You've said so much in so few words, and I love that picture! It made me want to cry! Well done, and good luck!
Laura xxx -
definitely wrenching Mal...
sigh.
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awww... beautiful. deep, profound, pulling. great job, Mal.
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mislaid child, is a great take on this picture, you are the poet with quite a take in and on poetry, amazing thoughts, give you a bunch of clappies! and a nice
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Deeply engaging and compelling... x
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