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Just Another Day

Just another Friday comes
One might think if they were anyone but me
The monsters you both become
As the day turns to night
I pray this time will be the last

You rather me call you mother then
With hurt words shrink my confidence
Never saw me fall into depression
I had cried then wanted to die
Just another day of abuse cast upon me

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  • SignedSinerelyMe
    February 19, 2008
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    aw oh...

    its...sweet in its own semi destructive way. it was honest. and i loved it.

    .me.
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  • z etoile
    February 19, 2008

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    Oh the feelings in this poem are so sincere!
    I hope this is just a poem and you are not really in depression if you are you can always talk to me. I know that you don't know me but you can