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The cruel dream of yesterday

Yesterday….
The most unusual day.
    Early morning, sun rising, snow falling.
It was so quiet, so unexpected
    I call out to the world, hoping some one will answer.
Another disappointing morning.
  Driving to work, I turn the music loud.
I can barely hear the words, with the anxiety of the day.
  Will they like me? Do they talk about me?
Questions, which I don’t really want, answered.
  I step inside the building, holding back the tears.
I look to the boy, who will never know I exist...
  The one who looks beyond me, to the blonde on my right.
The teacher begins to talk, I barely listen.
  To busy having thoughts of him
I hear the class rise; I think it must be time to go.
    The boy I long to be with walks in my direction
I look behind me, no one is there.
  My heart skips a beat as I think, is he coming to talk to me?
He says, hello in such a sexy voice I almost forget to speak back
      He tells me, he thinks I am the most beautiful woman in the world.
I look into his blue eyes, and wonder why today.
    Suddenly I hear bells chiming.
I wonder where it’s coming from
  I wake up, and look around my bedroom...
I began to cry
    What a cruel dream.
I began to hope tomorrow will be better…
    For yesterday, was just another trick to my heart.

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  • Lancashire Lad
    April 23, 2008

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    wow

    tht was so strong and ive been there before so i know what it feels like. there was this girl that i really fell for and she only had eyes for this strong hard lookin lad. she didn't wanna go out with a geek like me at all just wanted to be mates. it was hard to get over but i did eventually. i think this was a great poem and i will defo be reading more of ur stuff. Nick x x


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 2, 2008

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    All these yesterdays after a while seem alike, until you find that one that answers back and life goes on happily ever after. Tough being a teen.


  • DogFish silver member
    March 1, 2008

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    ...the only consolation, I find, about getting older is that I'll never have to live with teenage angst again. You really made the tension palpable- asleep or awake!


  • Malabu
    February 22, 2008
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    are you at work? or in school?
    im confused....or are you tricking me too?