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Grounded

Under the level of incoherent chatter
Risk it all to find a ladder
But there ain't no point in chasing the sky
Just stick with the ground and wonder why

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Kinda sucks....I just had these lines in my head and couldnt think of a poem around them. So I just went for this

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  • V.Violet
    March 8, 2008

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    Makes me think of someone wondering about life, then getting told basically that it's dangerous to question like that. Nice. I also like the shortness.

    Good luck.