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All I want to do

When I look into your eyes,
Do you know what I want to do?
All I want is to sit,
And cuddle up with you.

That’s all I want to do,
Every hour of every day.
But the best I can do,
Is give you a hug when you say hey.

I hope one day,
My dreams will come true,
Then all I will do,
Is sit and cuddle up with you.

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  • Angelflower
    March 28, 2008

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    Oh this was really sweet.. The emotion of hope and love in this was evident in your words.. great write..
    Peace to you, Jetleena


  • WithNobodyButYou
    February 21, 2008

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    This is a really good write, emotion really comes out in here and I really like the last verse, it is really sweet! Congrats dearyy =]
    Xo


  • Wilted Rose Bush
    February 17, 2008

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    This is another great write which really shows your emotion. It has great depth. Well done on such a good write.