All in the day's slot
the summer, being very hot
made the humans to sway,
streams of sweat in lot
As the dark night embraced the honey tasting moon
its light spread cool breezes to the earth, unlike in noon
Having strained and sweat a lot during the day
the sculptor made woman and also the creator's beauty
took on to the bed and softly on the queen mattress
and slipped into deep sleep, undressed to half nakedness
Author notes
slipped into deep sleep, undressed to half nakedness
A contest entry
- 19th Contest by Spiritualangel PIF.. 10x10..Picture Prompt by spiritualangel.
300 points, ended February 21, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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sculptor made woman and also the creator's beauty
took on to the bed and softly on the queen mattress
and slipped into deep sleep,
Beautiful. Best of luck.

