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Why I Cry

i've never lived a life so beautiful
surrounded by people who love me
no worries or cares that trouble my mind
i live with myself in peace and harmony

so why do i cry
and why do i wish to... (die)

i can never be complete
happiness is too damn perfect
who would i be to me
without a tear in my eye..
and that's why i cry

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  • Kelli Marie
    February 16, 2008

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    I think this is a good write. Why does anyone cry? A pretty perplexed question. Very nice write. Enjoyed the read.
    Kelli