Nestled between once shared sheets,
your scent lingers softly upon the pillow.
The cool breeze echos your name
as I eagerly drift into elemental dreams.
Safe within my subconscious,
forsaken thoughts of you flourish.
Vivid memories of tales no longer told
surface within this private sanctuary.
Allow me to remain where no one can interfere,
where memories consume reality.
A contest entry
- 19th Contest by Spiritualangel PIF.. 10x10..Picture Prompt by spiritualangel.
300 points, ended February 21, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice entry you have here. Thanks for sharing Crystal.
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Wonderful piece Crystal. This should have been in the top three spots for sure in this contest. Cant please everyone I guess.
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Lovely.....love does have a way of touching us all......nice sensual read ......
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oh how beautiful and how our minds wonder off in memory lane sometimes... great job puting this to the pen!
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Nestled between once shared sheets,
your scent lingers softly upon the pillow.
The cool breeze echos your name
as I eagerly drift into elemental dreams.
Beautiful. Best of luck. -
Wonderfully sensual and just beautiful. I love this peice because it touches me, like a page out of my own history come to play it's little games with my senses. Well done my love. Well done.
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Such vivid memories and they are beautiful. Love has a way of doing that to us. It leaves footprints on our hearts that last a life time. This is a lovely piece and I wish you the best of luck in the contest with it. Thank you for sharing it with me. Keep writing poet.
seamaiden ♥
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A well written piece of poetry. You did an excellent job. I enjoyed the read. Hope it does well in the contest.
Kelli
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