The golden butterfly
flutters innocently
Across the satin path
The golden butterfly
flies carefully
Into the furry cavern
The golden butterfly
drifts peacefully
In the crisp air
The Golden Butterfly
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 30 words more or less by mysticstorm.
575 points, ended February 17, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ohh..the repertition is very effective and I love the golden background. I love butterfly poems so of course, I really like this poem. It is very pretty and I like your choice to words too!
Ellie
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Sweet and beautiful use of 30 words.
Great job, Congrats on your on your trophy.
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I love butterflys. There is something special about them. Like they are reborn when they become a butterfly, and they live such a short live then. I enjoyed this read. Congratulations on your trophy!
Sam
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This is very beautiful... A golden butterfly, huh? I'd like to see one of those. I would hold out my finger and await its tickly touch on my fingertip. :) That'd be pretty awesome. Lovely descriptions here. Thanks for sharing! :f M a r l u x i a
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aw sucha sweet write from a sweet girl good luck
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Awwww how lovely. Butterflies are beautiful, aren't they? I think they help make the world look peaceful and gorgeous; especially monarchs. Thanks for sharing.
Brian -
beautiful image of this golden"chosen"butterfly. best of luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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Very beautiful and so well said...creations of beauty made by the hand of the Maker are beyond our simple grasp...you wrote of it so well...
Thank you for sharing, dear poet.
mystic -
A beautiful write about a beautiful creation of God. I enjoyed the read very much. Good luck to you in the contest.
Kelli
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