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Charcoal Wings

                                *Appearance*
Nickname/Alias: Jessa (Charcoal Wings)

Age: 19

Height: 6 ft

Weight: 120 lbs.

Type: Dark Faerie

Faction: Evil

Hair Color: Black

Hair Length: low back

Eye Color: Deep purple

Special Markings: Wings

                          **Fighting Abilities**

Class: Witch, Faerie

Weapons: Magical Powers

Hand: Right

Special Abilities: Fly, Spells

                    **Personality**

History: Abandoned at birth, Raised by vampires, Sent to vampire school.

Personality: stubborn, holds a grudge



Charcoal Wings begin to fly
Lifting this girl way up high

Everything going well
She conjures up a spell

Thrashing the people in town
Enough to send her flight down

The spell turns into a rapid burst of bombs
She doesn't realize what she has done wrong

Spells are powerful, and are easy to cast
But spells like these do not last



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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 27, 2008
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    I like your description of her, especially her hair and her eyes. I have a clear picture of what Jessa (Charcoal) would look like, if she were real! She sounds scary though so I wouldn't want to find out, she sounds the type to not mess with and who will turn on you at any given moment. Nice touch.


  • creationsfromheart
    February 25, 2008
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    wonderful write here with nice flow and rhyme!