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determined to keep on

Jackie Chan told me
to change my circumstances
so instead of giving in to limbo
i will shake on my suit of armor
all in to
fight for you.

i will not
give up so easily,
Ben Gibbard.

because my name means strong
and i've got to live up
to that, at the very least

recieve me, embrace me
i'm less than a month
away, Abe Lincoln, get ready
for chills and thrills and
special pillows shaped like superheroes

i am
so
ready.

let's go.
let's go.

Author notes

oh
let's go.
wipe away the tears
or just let them flow
i will
climb
higher.

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  • red violence up
    February 23
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    i agree that the notes should be part of the poem.


  • unbroken record gold member
    February 21
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    i love when people get the beat so deep in their head it touches everything they write, like when i or you ramble on into the authors notes. awesome.

    totally awesome poem.

    ben gibbard just did a double take. i am so recording me reading this. oh man.


  • blind alley
    February 18

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    -because my name means strong
    and i've got to live up
    to that, at the very least
    i'll never live up to mine.

    i agree with the comment below me.


  • wistfully written
    February 16
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    your authors note should be part of the poem girlie. also: SO EXCITED TO SEE YOU!

    • acoustical
      February 16
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      i'll consider that.

      also: ME TOO. can i really stay with you? will you vacuum, because, remember, i'm allergic to cats
      ...am i gonna die from that?
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