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Shoe Affair

Shoes, Shoes, Shoes, I love to say the word.
Some might say I'm weird, others just a nerd.
I love to spend many hours, in my closet bare.
Trying on my shoes, its become a love affair.

I keep them all so charished from year to year to year.
Never to be worn again pairs, just to have them near.
Shoes tell our stories each pair of different times and places.
Pulling out a pair, you'll see reflected in our faces.

The bright red pair speaking of a sexy wild night.
The low black pair very telling of a friends burial site.
The bright pink pumps trying to make, a woman from a girl.
Trips to the shore for a love affair, the sandals made of pearl.

The five inch heals help make the short girl stand so tall.
She can take on the world, the bitches at work, no job to big or small.
They make our legs look great, make us feel sexy, tall, and thin.
The give us a courgae to face the day, that comes deeply from within.

The lepaord print, the leather mules, the sling backs, and the flats.
Varried colors, styles, and shapes the pairs that match our hats.
Men give us greif about the number, some things they'll never understand.
Shoes complete the outfit, tell our story, make life easier to withstand.



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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    June 26, 2008

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    Great

    I loved how you used almost every kind of shoe imaginable with their own little world surrounding them good luck in the contest

  • sanjay kanna
    April 14, 2008

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    Funny one!

    Good imagery used in this piece. Enjoyed a lot!I liked your rhyming sense. All the Best in the contest. Thank you so much for your entry in my contest.

  • dillpickle62
    February 26, 2008

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    Hahahaha....

    This is a great funny poem. As I once knew a closet like yours. My boss pee'd in it one night thinking it was the bathroom while sleep walking. Boy! Was his wife ever mad.
    Hahaahaha....Keep with the excellent penning Preacher.


  • jamiedoring
    February 18, 2008

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    You got it it GIRL! Aint that the truth! lol....Part 2 is about purses right???

    I appreciate the shout out to the short girls in pumps and the power and confidence worn with them. Loved it!! Great write!