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The Next Willy Wonka

I poured out the chocolate
Into the mold

And I put it in the fridge
So it could get cold

I squeezed the green gel
Into worm shapes

I dropped lemon and white chocolate
Into the crepes

The chewy peanuts and oatmeal
Were put on the stove

To cook up and bubble
After they decomposed

Water was added
To the next pot

I added some ice
To the liquids that were hot

I mumbled to the cookies
"Watch out, I'm gonna dunk ya"

When Bobby walked in and laughed,
"You're going to be the next Willy Wonka!"


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  • little-hug
    September 22, 2008

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    This is sooo cute and funny. It made me smile I love how it rhymes and how easy and fun it was to read out loud! Thanks for sharing and congrats of your bronze trophy
    Ellie


  • Erin200
    February 16, 2008

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    lol this is really sweet. literally! I like the imagery and description in this one. Great job and good luck in the contest!

    ~:Citrus:~


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 16, 2008

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    hehe this is such a fun write it made me hungry aswell hehe i love the imagination in this piece well donme


  • Kelli Marie
    February 16, 2008

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    lol....I love it. This is a great write. Very interesting. Keeps the readers attention. Has great imagery and description. You did a great job rhyming..has an easy flow. I hope it does well in the contest.
    Kelli