Its second nature for you
To love me though there
Is no love to be found
For me its first to make you
The last one
The last one in my life
The first to make you cry
So let’s water it down
Till there is no more taste left
Don't say you've forgotten
What I need
All I don't need
Or want is her
Tonight, tonight I sent out apologies
Inside this room I contemplate
If I try to say her name
I'll just bite my tongue
Its your
Nightmare
Make sure to handle it well
Turning up the amplitude of my evil
To yell Leave Me Alone
(I don't care)
I don't care what she thinks of me
I don't care what she thinks of me
Not even when I stuff you
In the trunk of a car
And decide to run off a cliff
The bottom of the ravine
What a crime scene
They wouldn't find her for a long time
It wouldn't matter anyways
You see
I don't care what she's doing
I know you think of me
I want you to stop thinking of me
I want you to start tonight
Tonight, tonight I send out apologies
Inside this room I contemplate
If I try to say her name
I'll just bite my tongue
Its your
Nightmare
Make sure to handle it well
Turning up the amplitude of my evil
To yell Leave Me Alone
(I don't care)
Turning up the amplitude of my evil
To yell I Don't Care
(Leave me alone)
Tonight, tonight I send out apologies
Inside this room I contemplate
If I try to say her name
I'll just bite my tongue
"I'd rather bite my tongue"
Author notes
option 7
In a list
A contest entry
- Get It Off Your Chest! by TheStupidLamb.
300 points, ended February 17, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OPTIONS!!!!!!!!! AND PREWRITES!!!!!!! by Ale E.
600 points, ended March 22, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It was very heartfelt, and quite deep. It really portrayed the emotion.
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hi i relly liked your poem
i like the way its written
i like the fell of it.
i love it its on of the best poems ive read
its dark thers love
the first few lines are my fav
couse you can tell if a poem is good or bad by the frist few lines
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I thought it was fairly good. I liked how it had an almost lyrical feel to it. Very nicely written.
Thank you for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck.
ale xox
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Pretty good. It has a chilly quality to it, but overall is rather good.
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i love it!!! sweetly chilling, disturbingly pleasing. it does sound a lot like a song.... great job!!! as over-used this phrase is, keep up the awesome work!!
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i like it. alot. It seems like a song almost. its probably one of my faorites... although its disturbing. I like the way it flows.. although the repeating at the end seems a bit much
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intense
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wow, scary and disturbinig but good
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Very interesting.
Mildly disturbing.
Strange.
I like it.
Good job.
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